First ever screenplay

There's actually a SPONGEBOB SQUAREPANTS episode where this happens as well. The episode is "Frankendoodle"

Yes.
That's right.
I watch SPONGEBOB.
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penny crayon

Does anyone here remember "Simon and the Land of Chalk Drawings". WHere he would climb over the fence and everything he drew on his chalk board had come to life???

Slim--Where are you from in Essex?? I lived in the Shenfield/Brentwood area.

Good Luck

well i come from the dirtyest town in essex and it was the worlds largest concil estate......any guess' hehe dagenham boy born n bred [img]biggrin.gif[/img]
i think i no what ur on about thats why i tried to make it cuz i remember it from somewhere just adding me own twist

and that is?

penny crayon is a cartoon that would of been popular when you were young... thats assuming anyways that you are around about the same age as me

and how old is that?

well from the way you speak and act i would say you are about 15 but you say you are old enough to drink so im guessing an under developed 18 year old perhaps

Being old enough to drink is a milestone in anyones life...............................

Check the thread "Children of a Lesser God" for a properly formatted, readable script.

Personally, I couldn't give two monkeys about your formatting and spelling. However, a proper layout and correct spelling is also a sign of respect to your intended audience (or why do you think HR people don't even bother with CVs that contain typos?). You are basically thanking them for taking the time to read and comment on your script, and a proper spelling and formatting will make their task so much easier and also force you to structure your ideas properly. If you cannot be a r s e d to bother with such niceties then I'm afraid you won't get very far.